Huge Brilliant
Help on a english paragraph to make it brilliant a grade B+ work plz.?
Suddenley the coldness approached me, so i got my old smelly blanket out and wrapped it around me , shivering as the coldness flowed by. But the blanket didnt really help me it had huge holes in and the ground was wet and awful so my blanket was of no use.
ps. remember the 5 senses sight,touch,smell, taste, sound i wnat this paragraph improved to a high standard plz.
As the coldness crept upon me, I searched for warmth. The remnents of an old blanket was all I found. Shivering through the night with only the stench of the wet ground and the decreped blanket as company, I craved the comforts of home.
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